Though, the fact that she killed (quite easily) the demi-god, makes even more clear the magnitude of her power. even if it wasn't an actual god, it makes me think that gods are still around and that there are strong powers that the girls should not underestimate. Oh goodness, what a great surprise! 2 updates in 2 days!! (^o^)/įirst we saw what's going on with Laura and now this terrific chapter with Janna.īack in Laura's Chapter, I was really glad to see one of the "deities" of this world coming to fight against her. New chapter is comming great though, having loads of fun writing this stuff.
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Do I use a skin that doesn't support them perhaps? Please help me, I need to find those damn things.Īlso, quick update, I'm skipping continents again so it migh be a while before I upload anything. Thanks again, really, but.where the fuck do I read PMs? Are there PMs on this website? That would be news to me. Please don't stop going on with this story. Now the "fighters" are back to Lauraville, but it's quite clear that something bigger has happened and that we are still far from the conclusion of this epic novel. (except for the very few typos like "son" instead of "soon" ) ) That's simply amazing! :DĪs for my last comment, I agree with everything you said and I wouldn't change a single word in your story so far. I thought that for this whole story you had a plan from the begin, instead, as far as I understood, you are building the plot in real time. Though, as always, your way to "dispose" of the characters unfolding more questions and a deeper plot at the same time, is simply is great! Xardas was a cool character and I'm a little sad that he died. Woohoo!! You're really doing things seriousluy! :)įirst of all, I really loved this chapter. Thanks again for your great reviewing routine! You should point those things out to me, any errors, please! I noticed I made a mistake though, I wrote Thorgun instead of Thorsten while I was still feverish from the last chapter. What will happen to Lauraville, Léon and Thorsten before Janna and Laura return I have no idea what so ever. On the other hand, a story that doesn't make people think and explains every detail easily becomes literature for children. The reviews tell me that people can follow the plots fine and get subtle hints and all that, but sometimes while I'm writing I'm thinking there should be shed a little more light on the background here or there. I'm currently a little conflicted over how much to explain and how much to leave open to interpretation. It doesn't come out as much as I wanted it too because I do not have enough time to write those 30k words chapters anymore, but that was the way I intended it. By keeping her death a secret, I tried to build more on what Dari felt like as she slowly discovers how the village has changed over night. Village is attacked, men scream, she curses and crushes people, they feather her with arrows but it's not enough and they finally slay her from up close. To do that would be to be predictable and being predictable is dull, a thing creators of comics might do well to remember as well )Īs for Nagash's death, well, it would have been quite mundane. You can't finalize a plotline by having everything play out exactly as you were hinting it would in the story. Perhaps if Nagash hadn't abused her and they would have killed Stonetree and Bruin together, but then Dari would still have to take Vengyrs body and leave Lauraville far enough so that Xardas could appear according to plan. Then Dari would have had to leave Lauraville and hike through the forest without any idea where to look. Think about what might have happened if they hadn't come. The whole conquest thing happened to spice things up and make it easier. Thank you so much for your reviews, they're always wonderful. PS: Thank you so much for this masterpiece. I have the feeling that when the two ladies will come back, it will end with the Andergastian trying to use them as human-shields.įinally, I am really curious so see which role Hafthor and Lèon will have in the forthcoming chapters. I'm not sure that revealing the truth about Steve and Christina to such a weak man was a good idea. Now it seems it's time for the two mighty giantesses to come back home, but I guess there are still some more things that have to happen before that. I really didn't expected to see Lauraville conquered and Nagash dead without "seeing" it happen. very happy to see that Dari, Steve and Christina are still alive.